Well the extra SG path certainly was a surprise
.- The new SG path used angles on the floor edges that then angle up to where the JP throws you onto the upper level. I noted that your triangular edges when standing up there, are pretty dark and cut off at their top ends. You might like to put your triangular lights texture on those (see the lights at the top of your tube from the PG into the "cave".
- Still not so sure about the TP opposite of the Haste. IMO it leads you you continuing running, falling towards the Haste. Gameflow is quirky here.
- The sit into the wall alcoves on the top floor are interesting. Give the upper area more breathing space. But every one is a dead end (except the new SG path JP one). Well... guess they are OK.
- Your JPs now are 3D... that certainly helps.
- I still feel that the JP near the GL needs some geometry that "organically" integrates into into that part of the map. You lower RL JP in the corner uses the Q3A standard concave into the wall... maybe some asymmetric rounding (only 1/4 a circle) on the right wall would help. Presently the JP near the GL looks like someone dropped it by accident... if you see what I mean.
- I like the glass windows.
- Not wanting to rock the boat, but when you go the path from the lower RL, to the GL you will encounter a narrow quite cosy path. I like it actually, only from previous bot games this is pretty much a literal bottleneck in the map. So I am wondering if making is 30% wider would not improve gameflow here. One could of course see it as a deliberate place to RL wall-spam to get kills that way. Which would be a rarity (usually RL spams floors only).
- Interesting sky, and "halos" around all the lamps. Maybe tone the halos around the lamps down a bit, i.e. make them more transparent.
- Over all I really like the texture choices and colour of the map. Looks very nice.
- Again not wanting to rock the boat, but when I take the SG path up the JP and towards the RG, you have these wider med level paths, to end in pretty narrow top level ones. I always find that disconcerting since I feel I might easily fall off. I admit this is a skill thing. But still, IMO, makes the top level gameflow feel gimmicky. Just a feeling, and other than moving a huge amount of brushwork there is nothing to be done about it. See this just as a comment.
- I am still confused what paths to take and why to take them... but that could be a good thing, that the player has to work them out for him/herself. Potentially increasing replay value.
Hope that makes some kind of sense.
