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i seen a bean
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:21 pm
by plained
thats it thats all

Re: i seen a bean
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:29 pm
by Ryoki
Hello, have you considered adding two or more lines to your poem, like so:
i seen a bean
that's it that's all
looked like a spleen
yesh yesh y'all
Re: i seen a bean
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:30 pm
by Doombrain
fuck off
Re: i seen a bean
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:35 pm
by plained
Ryoki wrote:Hello, have you considered adding two or more lines to your poem, like so:
i seen a bean
that's it that's all
looked like a spleen
yesh yesh y'all

i like!
another?
i seen a bean
thats it thats all
where has it been?
prolly at the mall!