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i seen a bean

Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:21 pm
by plained
thats it thats all :shrug:

Re: i seen a bean

Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:29 pm
by Ryoki
Hello, have you considered adding two or more lines to your poem, like so:

i seen a bean
that's it that's all
looked like a spleen
yesh yesh y'all

Re: i seen a bean

Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:30 pm
by Doombrain
fuck off

Re: i seen a bean

Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:35 pm
by plained
Ryoki wrote:Hello, have you considered adding two or more lines to your poem, like so:

i seen a bean
that's it that's all
looked like a spleen
yesh yesh y'all

:olo: i like!

another?

i seen a bean
thats it thats all
where has it been?
prolly at the mall!