how's my sketch?

[Uaintseenme]

Drew this with a pen, so no erases...hense the reason it's called a sketch.

[lvlshot]http://www.v0dk4.com/images/sketches/soljasketch.gif[/lvlshot]

[Foo]

A damn sight better than I can do.

But I don't know what that counts for.

[Uaintseenme]

I want to make a comic for my website...like an online comic, but I don't know the first damn thing about making comics. Although I can make sketches :icon32:

[rep]

You need to learn about anatomy and crosshatching.

Minus one point for the thong, but plus one point for giving her realistic tits. Too often comic style babes have size triple Z breasts.

You need to learn how to draw clothing folds, too.

Edit: Also think about your composition in a 3D space.

[plained]

well

not everythings about you foo

[Uaintseenme]

What do you mean anatomy? I put the tits and the crotch in the right place :icon29:

[Foo]

well

not everythings about you foo

Not from my perspective :icon32:

[plained]

hehe

its obviosly everyall about me ey hehe :P

[Guest]

Its ok.

[feedback]

SHES FAT AND UGLY

[plained]

she has a lingering left arm rotater cuff injury

[Uaintseenme]

she has a lingering left arm rotater cuff injury

What the hell does that mean? lol

[Pauly]

How the hell do you manage to dress yourself?

[Uaintseenme]

How the hell do you manage to dress yourself?

How the hell do you manage to be completely unfunny every single time you post in one of my topics?

edit: oh and if you must know how someone goes about dressing themselves, it goes like this; pick a pair of boxers, pick some pants, pick a shirt, put them on and BAM like emril you just kicked yourself up a knotch. I hope that was educational.

since i'm on the ball, here's one more question: How the hell are you a moderator? :lol:

[duffman91]

I like her dog shirt.

[Uaintseenme]

heh...that dog thinger came from the little logo for my site. Some people here like to refer to it as a 'furry'.

[HM-PuFFNSTuFF]

[Uaintseenme]

that's scary

[Uaintseenme]

I wish I could get straight criticism out of you bastards.

[Dave]

It would be a little better if you had spent as much time on he arms as you did on her tits.. Arms don't bend below the shoulder and her forearm is atrophying on the and her left arm is missing a tricep. Her chin looks like someone cut a big chunk of it off, she has definition in one calf, but her other leg probably has cankles, and I think she has a broken eye as well

[feedback]

and I think she has a broken eye as well

obliv

[Uaintseenme]

it's a sketch, what do you want from me? but I do admit I should study up on body parts

[dnoyc]

you should start studying your wrists. by slitting them.

[rep]

I wish I could get straight criticism out of you bastards.

I gave you straight criticism.

Learn anatomy. You're drawing a generic silhouette. Anyone can do that. You need to understand how the major muscles wrap around each other to produce that silhouette. Then you'll be able to draw a figure in any pose.

You draw worse than I did when I was in the third grade. I'm serious.

Detail is easy. Focus less on detail and more on form. When you add detail, try to stay within the lines, for fucking god's sake. Look at the clip on the gun in her right hand.

Also learn something about line quality and line width. You're running over the same line many times with your pen, creating a scratchy and uncertain look.

Think about fucking light sources. You've got shadows in all directions on her face and holster.

Think about things before you draw it out. Why would her uhh ninja bandana be whisping in the wind, but her hair and the thing under her right arm aren't?

[seza]

Drew this with a pen, so no erases...hense the reason it's called a sketch.

[lvlshot]http://www.v0dk4.com/images/sketches/soljasketch.gif[/lvlshot]

i could sneeze ink on a piece of paper and it would look better. terrible, just terrible