I think you need to sort out the JPs in the map. Having a JP sitting in the middle of the floor with no indication of just where it's going to send you (up doesn't count ), is annoying. It means you're playing the map rather than the game.

I also think it's be better if the plats had a uniform design. For example, I kept jumping onto the one roughly below where the LG is only to find that it went nowhere because there was a gap at the back which I didn't find with others. I must admit I've never been a big fan of plats in Q3. They impede the flow of the game.

I see that you've included the common.shader in your pk3 which you don't need to because we already have it. Besides, it might mess things up for mappers because of potential conflicts it could cause.

The lighting seemed a bit flat and dull. Are you going to add some lights (fixtures) or just leave the lighting sourceless?

Looking the the texturing, it's a little bit patchy in places. In places it's as if you tried a texture to see what it was like, didn't like it, but forgot to replace it. There's an instance of one of the spider textures from the Q3 base set which suddenly, and for no reason I can discern, appears on a section of wall.

Bots seem to do well enough, although there seemed to be a lot of action around the TP area and once you have the RG, there's a nice long line of sight from the TP end to the stairs where players are potentially quite vulnerable.

I actually like the fog throughout the level, but what about the lower areas where the red fog was? Just leave it like that...maybe some spkes or something? What do ya think.

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