
@method: your shots look awesome. although I agree with this plastic_cream that those floortiles need some work.
IMO even the lighting could be enhanced by toning it down a lot. These dirty windows shouldn't light the scene that much. Especially the wall around the window is too bright if you ask me. But maybe there are some light sources which can not be seen, who knows

Also your film-noir style reminds me of the sin city movie or similar black/white productions using one bright color for contrast. Maybe you should stay with these grayish tones and just put some blood decals in
