http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pm7pOXmCbew
Could you please go and watch it and tell me what I need to improve and
if it is any good thanks

Just QFT, nothing to add. Find ppl to play on lan, learn strafing (there's plenty of guides, even here). And before creating a video, just watch some of those on own-age.com and ask urself how is ur video compared to those. Cuz now its nothing except for laugh. Sry to say that, but just watch how pros play, play by urself and maybe one day we'll see a good video by ucreep wrote:Rap Music
DUELLING A BOT
You move like my aunt Essie
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GOT FRAGGED BY A BOT
There's some concepts to completely toss out before you bother pressing Record again.