I need the help of pros. Yes, you

FREAKIN HEARD IT

, of the biggest pros (if any is better than me), to spot and "bug report" (lol) my errors that lead me to fail in the first moments of the following demo. With time I start building up neat skilling and
start scoring a bit, but I still think it was a bit too
lacky of skills for one semi-pro (like me)...
https://mega.co.nz/#!JIQwURyI!om7HgN1-i ... uFK8lBe9BM
[spoiler]Want more demos from me? But want to see me doing nightmare at bots? Include your answer in the end of the posts inside spoilers and then I put the links in the next post depending on votes![/spoiler]
[color=#BF4000]Who cares with me?[/color] [color=#BF0080]Everyone ragequit![/color]